I would like to take this opportunity to get my English reviewed.
I hope that someone is willing to check (roughly) how many errors I have in the text below, and the severity of the errors. Please note, that I tried my very best, and used about 3 hours to write this text (and check it, and recheck it, etc). I haven't got this kind of exam for over ten years, so it will be exciting to hear the results!
My native language is Finnish. I have studied English at school for nine years. Three years at elementary school, three years at middle school, and three years at high school. My English was first time in real use at university, where some of the teaching material was in English. Nowadays I need English in my daily work, as the company where I work at is multinational and English is the official company language. Fortunately, written English is all I usually need.
In addition the things mentioned above, I have been in English "language immersion" my whole life. On TV about 50% of the programs are in English, usually made in the USA. We have subtitles on every TV program which isn't in Finnish, except programs for children which are dubbed. So, one can hear foreign languages on a daily basis. I think that's great for two reasons:
1) It forces everybody to read Finnish every day (on the subtitles), which enhances people's ability to read
2) I think the movies and TV programs lose some of their originality when dubbed
One more point about English I'd like to add is, that all computer programs are usually in English. Especially all computer games. So, if this doesn't motivate young men to learn English, then what does!
Some words about why I joined to BITOG. I believe I started with the same question as everybody else: What's the best motor oil? It took some 100 hours of reading of the old posts in BITOG to eventually discover the final truth: It depends...
After that important oil related question was sorted out, I understood that BITOG is a fun and useful place where I could practice also my English. So, not only would I learn new things about oil, but also I would learn new words and idioms by reading. And most importantly, I could enhance my written English by contributing to the discussions in the forum. After about 100 posts to this forum in one year, I feel that I have succeeded in this. And today, I'm proud to say that my English is much better and more versatile now, than what it was a year ago.
I must emphasize that the misspelling in all my previous posts in this thread were done on purpose. The goal was to have some fun, and to create a fault in every sentence I wrote. But in this text I tried my very best to avoid all errors in spelling and grammar I possible could.
I have collected the whole process of writing this text below, so you can see what kind of effort it was for me to write this text. My guess is that most of the errors in my text will be with the prepositions: in, on, at, of, etc. It's sometimes hard to tell which one I should pick. I'm also prepared for the fact, that the word order might have been awkward in some places.
So, how many errors did you find? Were the errors bad? And was it obvious that it was written by someone that isn't a native English speaker?
At the end I would like to say that I agree with you all, that good language increases the credibility of the writer. And that's why I always target for the best possible English in my posts.
Gentlemen, keep up the good work!
Details about the writing process:
Hard parts, which I had to google:
- English language. With big or small first letter
- School system naming
- It depends => Checked if this is ok to be said
- Is BITOG a message board, an internet forum, a site, or what?
- A "post" in an internet forum => Is the "post" the correct term for a message
- Not only ... but also => Checked how this is used
- Credibility => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Native English speaker => Didn't know how to say this correctly
- Target for => Checked if this was the correct way to say that I pursue something, aim at something
- Keep up the good work => Checked if I had this correctly
Part of the text, where I suspect that the grammar is incorrect, but I can't figure out how I should write it:
- "enhances people's ability to read" => People's... Should I use some other word?
Words I did first write incorrectly, but MS Word's spell checker saved me:
- grammatics => grammar
- wery => very (oops...)
Words I did check from the dictionary:
- Dictionary => Didn't remember this word
- Severity => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Especially => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Recheck => I wrote with hyphen first, but according to the dictionary it's without one
- Hyphen => Didn't remember this word
- Exam => Didn't remember this word
- Multinational => I wrote this with hyphen first, but according to the dictionary it's without one
- Nowadays => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Except => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Children => Checked that this is for sure plural
- For sure => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Plural => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Teaching material => Didn't sound right, but the dictionary did confirm that I was right
- People => Is a problematic word, is it a plural already or not?
- Originality => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Eventually => I had forgotten this word
- Confirm => Didn't remember this word
- Related => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Sort out => Checked if "out" is the correct second word
- Idiom => Checked if I remembered this word correctly
- Contribute => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Versatile => Didn't know this word
- Emphasize => Checked if I remembered this word correctly
- Misspelling => Checked if I remembered this word correctly
- Sentence => Checked if I remembered this word correctly
- Suspect => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Word order => Didn't know how to say this
- Awkward => Checked the correct spelling
- Spelling => Checked if I remembered the meaning of this word correctly
- Closing words => Didn't know how to say this
Words where I almost went wrong:
- Loose vs. lose